"Miri wondered if worry could actually kill a person."
and
"Esa's smile seemed big enough to break loose."
Aren't those lines just perfectly descriptive and short at the same time. I can't handle sentences that go on and on about the weather or beauty of something - get to it!! These lines described the situation perfectly and succinctly. Wonderful. So, what are you waiting for? Go to the library!
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